Tuesday, February 14, 2012

The New Sphere Movement

The New York Times and the blog that I follow, Deadspin, have very different styles of writing. I have notice that in Deadspin, the news articles are more for your entertainment and written in that way. It is freely written with opinions and curse words that draw in a certain audience. Its lack of professionalism is what intrigues me and keeps me reading more. The New York Times on the other hand is more news orientated although some stories can be presented to entertain the reader. But it is just the presentation, the info is strictly news. The writers want to make the articles more readable to their audience so they add things to make it more interesting and entertaining.
                The mobile site of Deadspin is quite handy. For their blogs, I have noticed that for some stories they only have a couple of sentences and a link. The sentence that they show is the most interesting sentence in the whole article but since the information is so little, you are forced to click on the link to continue to read. Due to the links, the author of the blog has an easier job. Instead of writing a whole article about another article, they can simply post a link for all to read the original article and call it a day. That saves the author plenty of time for other projects or to take a nap! This new press sphere is among blogs more than newspapers. I’ve noticed some changes to New York Times, but not many.

The New Press Sphere

Jarvis’s illustration of the new press sphere seems correct. He defines the new press sphere as something anyone can get involved with due to the internet. People who want to join the press sphere have the capability to do so by creating their own version of news stories or by adding links to enhance the story. He adds that due to this new press sphere, our old traditions are disappearing. For example paper begins to be non-existent as photos become more prevalent. The new press sphere is giving everyone a chance to become news writers in their own way. This reminded me of the time a fellow student edited a story on Wikipedia and added a random link to cougars, proving anyone can create news very easily as long as they have the motivation to do so.
            His model, for the most part, was not confusing to me. It seemed to make perfect sense and the models cleared up and confusions that I had. In today’s news, I mainly retrieve it online with plenty of links to click on. Although the links are there, the only times that I click on them is if I am over interested on a topic and I want to learn more about it. Otherwise, the article that I am on holds all the information that I am usually looking for. To me, the links can be obnoxious and overwhelming. They can cover up the story you are looking for and sometimes even take you of track. Links are helpful in certain situations but I usually avoid them.
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Sunday, February 12, 2012

The blog

Www.deadspin.com
I'm following this blog because it is a blog about sports and that's what I'm interested in!

Tuesday, February 7, 2012

NY TIMES

            I have noticed while reading through the NY Times, I have only read articles that have immediately interested me.  As bad as that seems, it is an improvement from not reading the news at all. I have tendencies to focus more on the big named stories and skim through the small articles on the sides of the paper. In doing this I have missed plenty of articles and basically discriminated against the smaller, weirdly placed articles. Also, since I usually only read articles that look interesting, I miss out on the ones that do not pop out to me right away. I am missing out on crucial news events and if I’m not going to read them, how will I ever know what is going on? Facebook? This is going to have to change. Officially it is my promise to this blog!!
            Ever since I have beginning to focus more of my time reading the news and seeing what the world is up to, I have found myself involuntarily reading the news for fun without even knowing that I am doing so. I actually just realized this as I was reflecting on this post. I cannot seem to pin point any other changes due to the news but slowly, I am sure I will see some differences in my reading and reading. The only other change is that I have been enjoying reading more and that is always a positive.
            I still need to get out of my comfort zone of reading personal interest articles and sports articles and begin reading about the world’s problems.

Comparing the News

                Compared to my classmates, I am beyond behind on keeping up with the news because it’s apparent that they go out of their way to see what’s going on in the world. For my case, the news usually comes to me. For example, when opening up my internet explorer, Yahoo is the first thing that pops up and it has a spot for news articles that immediately catch your attention. This is mainly how I get my news but in my classmate’s blogs, I have noticed the get their news from a variety of places.
            Finding out that mostly all of my classmate’s get their news from the internet was not a surprise at all. In fact, seeing that some of them actually read news from a newspaper was surprising!! Websites such as CNN, New York Times, and even Facebook was used to get news.
            Getting news from Facebook was unexpected. I thought I was going to be the only one to say that but as I was reading my classmate’s blog, I saw that someone also found out about the death of Osama Bin Laden on it, just as I did. Facebook is beginning to have a lot more purposes now then it previously had. People are beginning to realize everything you can do with it and some people are actually post important things on there. I have seen more news on Facebook than I have ever seen before!!
            It’s apparent that we are more focused on literature on the internet than paper form and I’m pretty sure Hedges is looking at all of us with disgust!

Monday, February 6, 2012

A New Age of Literacy

Thinh Bui
Final Draft
New Age of Literacy

Audience: New advances in technology, such as the web and smart phones, have made the older generation feel nervous. Scared of how it is changing the younger generation and what it can potentially do in the future, many people are perceiving technology as a negative thing. Writers such as Chris Hedges and Nicholas Carr are among them. They are skeptical and afraid of the unknown. By depicting the web with all of its’ different forms of social media and search engines, I am able to provide them with the basis of my counter argument that the web is not slowly deteriorating our literacy skills but rather it is evolving it into a new and better type of literacy.

Through new technology and the web, we have created a new way to interact and socialize with other people. Because of technology, we are able to keep in touch with people from across the globe. Facebook is very popular with the younger generation. It is a social network that allows people to keep their friends updated on what they are doing by uploading photos, updating their status, posting messages on their friends’ walls, and chatting with their friends. Twitter, a social networking site for micro-blogging, allows people to send instant updates to their network and follow people of interest to them.  
Before social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter, writing was non-existent outside of the classroom, which led Andrea Lunsford, a writing and rhetoric professor at Stanford University, to believe that, “Technology isn't killing our ability to write. It's reviving it—and pushing our literacy in bold new directions” (Thompson 1). With technology, we are able to incorporate more writing into our daily lives as well as mastering kairos, which is the ability to “assess their audience and adapting their tone and technique to best get their point across” (Thompson 1). Lunsford found that students are really good at tailoring their message to fit their audience and using different tones and techniques to state a point. Technology and social networking sites are forcing the younger generation to write more and in a variety of ways. For example, a tweet can have a maximum of 140 characters, which means that we have to be very concise in our communication. Technology and the web are changing the younger generation’s style of writing, but with that change it is also allowing us to write more and learn new ways to write on our own.
Although the positive aspects of technology and the web are apparent, there is still skepticism towards the effects of technology and the web. The older generation believes that if something is not broken then it does not need fixing. Although not everyone from the older generation is closed minded, I found this to be true with my friend’s grandmother. Her house is filled with old things like cassette players, antenna televisions, and even out dated couches. She does not want to change the way she is living because she is so comfortable and use to how things already are. Hedges and Carr feel that the traditional way of reading and writing had little to no flaws so there is no reason to change it. Their fear of the new outcome due to technology and the web is blurring their vision to see the positive effects. If they were less scared and more willing to change, they will see that there are a lot of things that can benefit them and make their lives easier. For example, instead of spending countless hours in the library searching through books for information for your research paper, you can quickly get the information online. The Internet has eliminated the time a student would waste flipping through pages after pages of books and replaced it with a quick and simple search on the web that contains everything a student needs. The endless amount of information that can be obtained by a click of a button has changed the way we retrieve literature and how we write.
            Unlike the older generation, we yearn for change and like to do what is in style. We are comfortable with change. Experimenting and adapting to changes are great qualities that we have acquired because it allows us to approach new things with caution but without the fear to hold us back. We are able to look past the unknowns and take in all the exciting new ways of the web. Without the fear that possesses the older generation, we are able to take advantage of everything that technology and the web has to offer.
Nicholas Carr’s concern about the effects of technology and the web on our reading ability is a fair argument. Reading has strayed away from the traditional sense not only by changing from paper form to electronic form, but in other aspects as well. He has found that the web and technology has caused people’s inability to be a “deep reader.” Skimming and power browsing have become more prominent.  These arguments may be true, but there are advantages to skimming. Being able to skim through long articles and getting the important points is truly a skill. It is challenging to process the content while skimming. This new skill, which was caused by technology and the web, has benefited countless students. I have been assigned long readings by professor and told to skim and take the most out of it. Also, due to social networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter, we have become fixed on reading short materials since we constantly read updates and tweets, which results in us reading more than we have ever had. The exposure to these social networking sites increases our total reading time. Technology is changing the way we read and write but the change that is occurring is increasing the amount of time that we actively read and write. Therefore this change is promoting us to be better readers and writers.
Although, my web usage, along with my classmates’, supports Carr’s argument about short attention span, it illustrates that the web is surrounding the younger generation with more things to read and write without them thinking it is an assignment, meaning that they are involuntarily enjoying reading and writing. There are so many distractions on the web, making it almost impossible to avoid them. By wasting our time on social networking sites and being distracted by other sites, we are spending more time reading and writing, which I see as beneficial since we are getting more exposure to literacy.
The web holds great wonders but you, the older generation, are too frightened to absorb everything it has to offer. It has an endless amount of information that is easily accessible. Many believe that it is too much information for anyone to handle.  Carr states a person will have, “information overload, that is instantly available (Carr 7).” He believes the quick fix of information is unmanageable and will lead to the destruction of literacy since we can obtain information without much effort. Any questions that we may have can be answered instantly.  For example, if your recipe book has been misplaced or lost, instead of trying to remember how to cook the perfect pot roast or trying to contact a relative to see if they know the recipe, you can simply turn on the computer and search for a pot roast recipe. Although thousands of recipes will show up, it still provides you with a quick response. You might even find a new recipe for pot roast that tastes much better than your original recipe. The ability of the web is boundless. 
In conclusion, technology and the web have transformed literacy to a different level. Lunsford states, "I think we're in the midst of a literacy revolution the likes of which we haven't seen since Greek civilization” (Thompson 1). Technology and the web has made us become better writers by teaching us kairos without us ever being aware of it and it has made writing more common outside of school-related activities, forcing us to interact and improve our writing styles. We have learned new methods of reading, including skimming and power browsing. The older generation’s assumption that the web is slowly deteriorating our ability to be literate is the opposite of what the web is actually doing for us. It has created a new type of literacy that has been formed by a faster way to get information, unlimited amounts of information from a click of a button, and more encounters with literacy. The older generation is missing out on the wonders of the new technology and the web. All they have to do to benefit from it is let go of the fear that possesses them and embrace the change.










Work Cited
Carr, Nicholas. "Is Google Making Us Stupid?" TheAtlantic.com. July 2008. Web. 29 Jan. 2012. <http://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/2008/07/is-google-making-us-stupid/6868/>.
Thompson, Clive. "Clive Thompson on the New Literacy." Wired.com. 24 Aug. 2009. Web. 29 Jan. 2012. <http://www.wired.com/techbiz/people/magazine/17-09/st_thompson>.

Sunday, February 5, 2012

News

Interesting enough, I have just noticed I get mostly all of my news off the internet. There is the casual news that I receive from talking to friends but more often than not, we do not discuss the news too much. Our conversations seem to consist more about our daily life and interests than what is going on in the world. Whenever I do receive words on current news, it is always from one of these three sites: Facebook, Yahoo, or YouTube. My lack of effort on being more aware of what is going on in the world has causes me to not even bother to search the news for anything. Usually, Yahoo would post their most important stories in the middle of their website and if it interests me, I would click on it to read more. On Facebook, if I see someone’s status talking about an interesting news topic, I would just open a new tab and read it as well. I do not go out looking for news but if it happens to be presented to me, I will read it.
            There are other places that I occasionally get news from. The radio is one that I might retrieve a little bit of news from. Usually, the stations always have breaks in between their music to discuss topics and sometimes when I am lazy to switch the station, I would sit and listen to what they have to say. I am constantly watching Sportscenter to catch up on every sport related news that I have missed. This channel would be where I obtain over half of my news.