Wednesday, March 7, 2012

10th POST

The most useful thing that I have gotten out of Professor Leake’s writing class is my newly found hobby of reading the news. Before this course, I would have never spent any time reading the news or searching for current events. Now, that our class is based on the news, I have been following the news every day. This course has changed my regular day schedule to incorporate some time for me to catch up on some news. In doing this, I feel more connected with the world and its’ problems as well as more “in the loop.”
                I also found our crazy off topic discussions very interested. It kept me from dozing off and also made the class enjoyable. What other class would talk about a controversy with a presidential candidate’s name?? Or even deathspace.com? This writing class is definitely a unique one and a class to remember.

Monday, March 5, 2012

Essay 2

Thinh Bui
March 5, 2012
Writing and Rhetoric
           
Lin and Ming
            Linsanity: the recent craze that has developed around the world due to Jeremy Lin’s outbreak as a star basketball player for the New York Knicks.
            Basketball stars are usually projected in the media as becoming great or being drafted early in the NBA drafts, but that wasn’t the case for Jeremy Lin. Lin’s story is different; he was the underdog. Although Lin led his high school team to win a state championship title, he didn’t receive any athletic scholarships and was not selected during the 2010 NBA draft but was still determined to make it in the NBA. Currently, Jeremy Lin is in his second year as an NBA player and has been through numerous teams, including the Golden State Warriors, Houston Rockets, and now the New York Knicks. He was also placed in the NBA’s Development League four times. The term “Linsanity” began to develop when Lin received the opportunity to play against the New Jersey Nets on February 4, 2012. Lin took that opportunity and played his best NBA career game leading his team to win against the Nets. Lin became the new starting point guard after his stellar performance in the Nets game and went on to lead the Knicks, a mediocre team, to a seven game win streak. After that, “Linsanity” was on full blast and Jeremy Lin officially became a star.
            Jeremy Lin has been the talk of the press and blogosphere since he emerged as a star in the NBA. There are many stories revolving around Jeremy Lin, from his race and religion, to his performance on the court. I chose to follow one specific story, Jeremy Lin and Yao Ming’s relationship, instead of focusing on “Linsanity” as a whole. When following the circulation of recent articles on Jeremy Lin’s relationship with Yao Ming, there are noticeably different changes and purposes behind each article. This essay will uncover those differences and reveal the purpose behind each article.
            On February 11, 2012, the ESPN website released the article, “Lin on Yao Ming: ‘He’s a big brother to me’” by Jared Zwerling.  Zwerling discussed the close bond between the two players, Jeremy Lin and Yao Ming. The article includes an original quote from the Lakers post-game interview (Feb. 10) with Jeremy Lin stating,
‘I talk to Yao after every game’, said Lin, who took part in Yao’s foundation tour in Taiwan in August 2010.’He’s taken me out to eat every time we’re in the same city. He obviously is a role model and a big brother and mentor to me. We keep in touch all the time’.[1]
The article also questioned whether Jeremy Lin would be the next great Asian player to take over Yao’s stardom by asking, “Can Lin take over that prestigious position?”; prestigious position referring to Ming’s position as the “Asian ambassador of the NBA”. [2] Not only was the author’s purpose in this writing to share Lin and Ming’s friendship but also to arise at the question of whether or not Lin can become the next Asian phenomenon. This changes Lin’s harmless, friendly quote about his friend, Yao Ming, to a debate about whether or not Lin could take over Ming’s spotlight.
            The following day, February 12, 2012, the NYDailyNews .com published, “Lin on Yao: ‘He’s obviously a role model and a big brother,’” by Frank Isola.  Frank Isola’s purpose behind this article is slightly different from the original writing. He still includes the quote about Lin and Ming’s friendship but decides to disregard the other statement about Lin being the new sensation. Instead, Isola focuses more on Jeremy Lin’s character and the way he has reflects his newly found fame upon his teammates and coaches. Isola claims, “Lin hands out praises as often as he dishes out assists”.[3] The article illustrates Lin’s character by incorporating quotes from him. Lin spoke of his fellow teammate saying, “Jared Jeffries is an absolutely glue guy for this team. What he does defensively, every single rotation… his whole demeanor, his whole aura, everyone respects him so much. I can’t think of anyone more underrated than Jared”.[4] This new addition to the story promotes Jeremy Lin as not only a good basketball player but also a great person. By omitting the statements that questioned how great Jeremy Lin was going to become from the previous article, this article gives the audience the chance to ignore what the future has for Jeremy Lin and focus on the present and how he is handling his newly found popularity.
            The article “Yao Ming Wanted Jeremy Lin in Shanghai,” written by Scott Schroeder was published by SBNation.com on February 14, 2012. The article’s intent was to discuss Jeremy Lin’s career and all the different places he could have ended up instead of New York. There are more comments about Jeremy and his chances of joining the Shanghai Sharks, Los Angeles Lakers, and other NBA teams than comments about Lin and Ming’s friendship. The previous quote about Lin and Ming’s friendship does come up in this article, but it is not as important due to the different purpose behind this article. Schroeder reports the different career paths that Jeremy Lin could have ended up on by pointing out, “There were numerous times that he almost ended up with the Los Angeles Lakers” and “he could have stuck with the Dallas Mavericks out of the summer league”.[5] This article does retain much of the content from the original article; however, it does not focus as much on Yao Ming’s role on Jeremy Lin. Instead, it replaces that focus with more attention on Lin’s career paths. By doing this, Schroeder completely changes the original topic and begins a new one.
            The article, “Yao among many Chinese fans rooting on Lin’s success story,” written by Fran Blinebury was published on the NBA website on February 16, 2012. This article mainly discusses about Ming’s feelings towards Lin and his unique style of basketball. Ming is quoted saying, “He (Jeremy Lin) has a high basketball IQ, but he also has more. He has an IQ about how to get along with people.”[6] Ming has observed much more than just the hype behind Linsanity; he has also followed Lin’s great attributes. Ming also reports that Lin “seems to be natural at making friendships and getting the team to play with him.”[7] Along with praising Jeremy Lin, Yao Ming also took the time to clear up misconceptions that the public has received about him being Lin’s mentor. Ming states, “First, Jeremy doesn’t need my help. He is very talented himself. And I am a big man and could not teach him how to be a guard.”[8] Ming’s statement acknowledges the accusations that he was Lin’s mentor while stating the truth. This article illustrates Joseph Harris’ technique of countering; the author first presents the idea that Ming is Lin’s mentor then presents Ming’s quote as a counter argument. This article has swayed off path from the original article and has lost the focus on Jeremy Lin and Yao Ming’s bond.  
            The new worldwide sensation on Jeremy Lin is not only inspirational because of the hardworking underdog story, but also because with him in the NBA, Asian communities now have another representative in the NBA. Similar to Yao Ming’s breakout on the NBA scene, Jeremy Lin’s success has resulted with China and other Asian countries gaining more interest in the NBA. They are both promoting the sport of basketball in the Asian communities. Ming endorses that he “hopes the direction of the Lin story goes to furthering the development of basketball talent among Asians and Asian-Americans and getting more to reach the highest levels of the game.”[9] As a Vietnamese-American basketball player, I see Linsanity bringing respect to all the Asian basketball players and creating more interest in a sport that Asians previously did not appreciate too much. Yao Ming and Jeremy Lin are the icons that the Asian communities need to instill the sport of basketball into their life. With the help of today’s media, his stories are able to spread across the globe and read by billions of people.
            The press and blogosphere have shown that due to the easy access of information through the web, anyone can have the capability to write their own version of a news story and add or delete anything they wish. For the story of Jeremy Lin and Yao Ming’s relationship, the headlines started out as two friends and then changed along the circulation period. As the contents in the original article moves to other sources, the purpose and intent of the content changes to whichever way best fits the new author’s style. The press and blogosphere is continuously changing and as information is passed to different sources, the purpose of each article will continue to change with it. I was pleasantly surprised to see that no articles shifted from the original positive story into a negative story. In today’s society, there have been instances where writers and the media focus on the negative aspects of stories instead of the positive aspect to stir up controversy. This could be a potential development of this story in the near future.
Works Cited

Blinebury, Fran. "Yao among Many Chinese Fans Rooting on Lin's Success Story." NBA.com. NBA Media Ventures, 2012. Web. 24 Feb 2012. <http://www.nba.com/2012/news/features/fran_blinebury/02/16/yao-ming-discusses-jeremy-lin/index.html>.

Isola, Frank. "Lin on Yao: 'He's Obviously a Role Model and a Big Brother." NYDailyNews. NY Daily News.com, 12 Feb 2012. Web. 24 Feb 2012. <http://articles.nydailynews.com/2012-02-12/news/31050998_1_jeremy-lin-role-model-big-brother>.

Schroeder, Scott. "Yao Ming Wanted Jeremy Lin In Shanghai." SB Nation. STATS LLC, 13 Feb 2012. Web. 24 Feb 2012. <http://www.sbnation.com/nba/2012/2/13/2794888/jeremy-lin-yao-ming-shanghai-sharks>.

Zwerling, Jared. "Lin on Yao Ming: 'He's a big brother to me'." ESPN. ESPN Internet Ventures, 11 Feb 2012. Web. 24 Feb 2012. <http://espn.go.com/blog/new-york/knicks/post/_/id/11404/lin-on-yao-ming-hes-a-big-brother-to-me>.


[1] Jared Zwerling, Lin on Yao Ming: ‘He’s a big brother to me’, 1
[2] Jared Zwerling, Lin on Yao Ming: ‘He’s a big brother to me’, 1
[3] Frank Isola, Lin on Yao: ‘He’s obviously a role model and a big brother’, 1
[4] Frank Isola, Lin on Yao: ‘He’s obviously a role model and a big brother’, 1
[5] Scott Schroeder, Yao Ming Wanted Jeremy Lin in Shanghai, 1
[6] Fran Blinebury, Yao among many Chinese fans rooting on Lin’s success story, 2
[7] Fran Blinebury, Yao among many Chinese fans rooting on Lin’s success story, 2
[8] Fran Blinebury, Yao among many Chinese fans rooting on Lin’s success story, 1

[9] Fran Blinebury, Yao among many Chinese fans rooting on Lin’s success story, 1

Sunday, February 26, 2012

Essay 2 Rough Draft

Thinh Bui
February 25, 2012
Rough Draft
           
            Linsanity: the recent craze that has developed around the world due to Jeremy Lin’s outbreak as a star basketball player for the New York Knicks.
            Basketball stars are usually projected to become great or drafted early in the NBA drafts, but that wasn’t the case for Jeremy Lin. Lin’s story is different; he was the underdog. Although Lin led his high school team to win a state championship title, he didn’t receive any athletic scholarships and he was not selected during the 2010 NBA draft but was still determined to make it in the NBA. Jeremy Lin is in his second year as a NBA player and has been through numerous teams including Golden State Warriors, Houston Rockets, and now the New York Knicks. He was also placed in the NBA’s Development League. Linsanity began to develop when Lin received the opportunity to play against the New Jersey Nets on February 4, 2012. Lin took that opportunity and played his best NBA career game leading his team to win against the Nets. Lin became the new starting point guard after his stellar performance in the Nets game and went on to lead the Knicks, a mediocre team, to a seven game win streak. After that, Linsanity was on full blast and Jeremy Lin officially became a star.
            Jeremy Lin has been the talk of the press and blogosphere since he has emerged as a star in the NBA. When following the circulation of recent articles on Jeremy Lin’s relationship with Yao Ming, there are noticeably different changes and purposes behind each article.
            On February 11, 2012 ESPN.go.com released the article, “Lin on Yao Ming: ‘He’s a big brother to me’” by Jared Zwerling. It discussed the close bond the two players, Jeremy Lin and Yao Ming, had with one another. The article includes an original quote from Jeremy Lin stating,
“’I talk to Yao after every game’, said Lin, who took part in Yao’s foundation tour in Taiwan in August 2010.’He’s taken me out to eat every time we’re in the same city. He obviously is a role model and a big brother and mentor to me. We keep in touch all the time.’”(1)
The article also questioned whether Jeremy Lin would be the next great Asian player to take over Yao’s stardom by asking the question, “Can Lin take over that prestigious position”; prestigious position referring to Yao’s position as the “Asian ambassador of the NBA”(1). Not only was Jared Zwerling purpose in this writing to share Lin and Yao’s friendship but to arise the question of whether or not Lin can become the next Asian phenomenon.
            The following day, on February 12, on the NYDailyNews .com, “Lin on Yao: ‘He’s obviously a role model and a big brother,’” was published on their website and written by Frank Isola.  Frank Isola’s purpose behind this article is slightly different from the original writing. He still includes the quote about Lin and Ming’s friendship but decides to disregard the other statement about Lin being the new sensation. Instead, Isola focuses more on Jeremy Lin’s character and the way he has reflected his newly found fame upon his team mates and coaches. Isola claims “Lin hands out praises as often as he dishes out assists” (1).  The article illustrates Lin’s character by incorporating quotes from Jeremy Lin.
“Jared Jeffries is an absolutely glue guy for this team. What he does defensively, every single rotation… his whole demeanor, his whole aura, everyone respects him so much. I can’t think of anyone more underrated than Jared” (1).
This new addition to the story promotes Jeremy Lin to not only be a good basketball player but also, a great person as well. To omit the statements that questioned how big Jeremy Lin was going to get in the previous article, gives the audience the chance to ignore what the future has for Jeremy Lin and rather focus on the present and how he is handling his newly found popularity.
            The article “Yao Ming Wanted Jeremy Lin in Shanghai,” written by Scott Schroeder, was published by SBNation.com on February 14, 2012. The articles intent was to discuss Jeremy Lin’s career and all the different places he could have ended up instead of New York. There are more comments about Jeremy and his chances of joining the Shanghai Sharks, Los Angeles Lakers, and other NBA teams than comments about Lin and Yao’s friendship. The previous quote about Jeremy and Yao’s friendship does come up in this article but it is irrelevant with the writing due to the different purpose behind this article. Schroeder reports the different career paths that Jeremy Lin could have ended up on by pointing out, “There were numerous times that he almost ended up with the Los Angeles Lakers” (1) and “he could have stuck with the Dallas Mavericks out of the summer league.” Compared to the original article, this article didn’t lose much material but it did take the focus away from Yao Ming’s role on Jeremy Lin and replaced that focus with all of Lin’s career paths. By doing this, Schroeder completely changes the original topic and chose to begin a new one.
            The article, “Yao among many Chinese fans rooting on Lin’s success story,” written by Fran Blinebury was published on NBA.com on February 16, 2012. This article talks mainly about Yao’s feelings towards Jeremy Lin and his unique style of basketball. Yao is quoted saying, “He (Jeremy Lin) has a high basketball IQ, but he also has more. He has and IQ about how to get along with people.” Yao has observed much more than just the hype behind Linsanity; he has also followed Jeremy Lin’s great attributes. Yao also reports that Jeremy “seems to be natural at making friendships and getting the team to play with him.” Along with praising Jeremy Lin, Yao Ming also took the time to clear up misconceptions that the public has received about Yao being Jeremy’s mentor. Yao states, “First, Jeremy doesn’t need my help. He is very talented himself. And I am a big man and could not teach him how to be a guard.” Yao’s statement acknowledges the accusations that he was Lin’s mentor while stating the truth. Since Blinebury presented the idea that Yao was Jeremy’s mentor then presented Yao’s quote as a counter argument, he used Joseph Harris’s technique of countering. This article has swayed off path with the original article and has lost the focus of Yao and Lin’s bond.
            The new worldwide sensation of Jeremy Lin is not only inspirational because of its’ hardworking underdog story, but also because with him in the NBA, Asian and Asian-American communities now have another representative in the NBA. Like Yao Ming, since his breakout on the NBA scene, China and other Asian countries have gained more interest in the NBA. They are both promoting the sport of basketball in the Asian communities. Yao endorses that he “hopes the direction of the Lin story goes to furthering the development of basketball talent among Asians and Asian-Americans and getting more to reach the highest levels of the game.” As a Vietnamese-American basketball player, I see Linsanity bringing respect to the Asian ball players and creating interest in a sport that Asians didn’t appreciate. Yao Ming and Jeremy Lin are the icons that the Asian community needs to instill the sport of basketball into their life.
            The press and blogosphere has shown that due to the easy access of information through the web, anyone can have the capability to write their own version of a news story and add or delete anything they wish. With the use of links, people are beginning to access their news independently. For the story of Jeremy Lin and Yao Ming’s relationship, the headlines started out as two friends and have changed throughout the circulation period. I was pleasantly surprised to see that no articles shifted from the original story and turned into a negative story. In today’s society, there has been incidences where writers and the media focus on the negative aspects of stories instead of the positive aspect to stir up controversy. As the contents in the original article moves to other sources, the purpose and intent of the content changes to whichever way best fits the new author’s style. The press and blogosphere is continuously changing and as information is passed to different sources, the purpose of each article will continue to change with it.

Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Taking an Approach

            Harris’s chapter about taking an approach caused a lot of confusion for me. There seemed to be more than one way to take an approach and they are to acknowledge influences, turn an approach on itself, and reflexivity. The way I  found Harris describing what taking an approach was instead of just rewriting something the exact same way the previous author wrote it, take the information that is present and put a twist and new style to it to change its’ original form but still have the same roots. Include your own writing style or method of writing so that the new piece of writing has a piece of you in it. While reading this chapter, his examples were helpful, but the example that kept popping up in my head is the remake of older movies.
            Taking an approach can be seen when a director takes an old movie script and directs a somewhat new movie but with the same story line. The director adds his own style of movie making and that is why people choose to watch remakes of movies.
            The example of taking an approach that I saw while reading Deadspin today was an article about Brady Quinn bashing Tim Tebow with hurtful comments. I previously read a similar article on Yahoo and noticed that Deadspin had wrote the same content, but there presentation style was different. Yahoo’s article was less opinionated and more of what occurred while Deadspin told the facts right away and included more opinions as well as  more of a comedic writing style.

Forwarding My Old Post

Example of Forwarding:
For this blog post, I have decided to write a completely new blog and incorporate illustrating, one of the ways to forward, into the new post. I will use my previous post about the New York Times to add as an example to my argument of how Hedges and Carr is correct when he states that the younger generation only reads what the eye finds interesting and the use of skimming. With a quote out of my previous blog post, my argument that Carr and Hedges is correct will be stronger because it provides a good example.

            Hedges and Carr strongly believes that the constant use of the web and new technology has cause a downward spiral in today’s literacy. They believe that due to the new technology and the web, the younger generation has begun to read and write less as well as lose their abilities to become a deep reader. Car states that the younger generation only skims through reading material. They are incapable of staying focus and are always distracted by things around them. In a blog called BlogNasty, the blogger says,
 “I have only read articles that have immediately interested me.  As bad as that seems, it is an improvement from not reading the news at all. I have tendencies to focus more on the big named stories and skim through the small articles on the sides of the paper.”
BlogNasty is admitting to the exact same allegations that Hedges and Carr’s has presented. He is among many younger generations that this information pertains too!

Sunday, February 19, 2012

Countering - Harris

Joseph Harris’s idea of “countering” is exactly what it seems to be. You are countering the work of another author! In other words, you are disagreeing with the ideas/points that an author is making and writing the opposing side of that argument. He points out three steps to countering and they are: “argue the other side”, “uncovering values”, and “dissenting”. For “argue the other side”, you present the other authors idea or argument and then present your counter argument. For “uncovering values”, you bring up any concepts that the author failed to discuss or acknowledge. For “dissenting”, you begin to develop your counter argument and present it.

                Since reading Deadspin, I haven’t found too many instances where an author actually used “countering”. Most of the blogs that I have read includes sports news and sports interests. The only case that I have seen may be the incident of the word “chink” in an ESPN’s mobile article. A writer used the word “chink” in his title and now ESPN is regretting it. There has been multiple blogs about the damage this has to ESPN’s name and to the Asian community, but I feel this isn’t really an act of “countering”.

                When countering someone’s work, it is extremely important to only focus on the writer’s argument and text. Avoiding any personal vendetta and only focusing on the writing doesn’t allow the chance to ruin your own writing with questions of validity and overall purpose. This way, the reader can gain the knowledge of your counter argument without and suspicion of false information.

Forwarding- Harris

Harris’s concept of forwarding is basically the use of another author’s text in your own writing. But with Harris’s simple idea, there are four sub components to it. There are four different versions of forwarding and they are illustrating, authorizing, borrowing and extending. When illustrating someone else’s writing, you are presenting their writing to make your argument stronger. You are taking out parts of their writing that you can use in your advantage and presenting them. Authorizing is citing another author’s writing to add validity to your own writing. Borrowing is using the other authors ideas or text in your own. Extending is incorporating their ideas but adding/extending to their argument with your own ideas.

                One term or phrase that I have seen being forward frequently around the sports world is the term “Linsanity”. Throughout the past two weeks Jeremy Lin as emerged as a star in the NBA and shows and blogs can’t help themselves with the term “Linsanity”. In the blog that I follow, Deadspin, incorporating “Linsanity” in their work or title automatically draws fans to it and they are using it to their advantage to draw the fans into reading their blogs. I’ve also noticed kind of an extending notion on Linsanity as well. People around the world have begun creating their own pun with his name. For example, Linderella story, Lindescribable, Linvincible. They have used one person’s creative idea of adding Lin’s name in front of any word that would fit and turned it into hundreds of newly used terms.